The Power of Getting Personal
By Glenn Silbert of GS Computers Plus, LLC


Letter writing is an art. You don’t just string a lot of business-to-business marketing jargon together with a “Dear” in front of it to make it a letter. A sales letter is a personal communication that must quickly capture the reader’s attention in the first line and bring them to the compelling conclusion, I’ve just got to do this/have this … now! It has been estimated through surveys that you can expect a 25 percent response from a personal note.

Why it works
Let’s look at the composition of a good note:

Paragraph 1: Begin with a personal statement, “I saw your …, and I just wanted to drop you a note/personal invitation.” It’s flattering and intriguing and acknowledges the reader as a colleague.

Paragraph 2: “Being a … myself” establishes a peer relationship. The rest of the paragraph focuses on the “pain point” in the industry and offers a solution, “I know the problems of...”
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Paragraph 3: Establish credibility.

Paragraph 4: Create a call to action, without sounding like a typical letter or e-mail offer. The last sentence should flatter the reader in a congenial, believable way. For example, “I also think you would be a great addition to the group.” The next time you sit down to write a letter or e-mail, get personal. Think of an actual person who meets your “best customer profile,” then jot him a note. You’ll be surprised at the difference it makes. And you’ll probably get a much better response.

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